
Red with an orange highlight. Love my mariposas!
Well, hello and welcome to Monday. It is Monday, right? I must admit that since retiring in this lovely place I am sometimes prone to losing track of days and time in general. But. Here we are facing day 8 of Linda Hillโs #JusJoJan annual writing event, and todayโs prompt comes from Sadje. I am also including a nod to Ceeโs Fun Photo Challenge. Todayโs prompt is the color red.
I thought it might be fun to catch up with our unwitting travelers, Dechlan and Noni. Iโve also titled this bit of fiction, so that means Iโm thinking of seeing it through to completion at this point. ๐We left our young lovers seeking help for a wounded ankle in what appears to be 1500โs Italyโฆ
Noni found herself crawling along a riverbank, grasping handfuls of thick dark grass as she struggled to move forward. She could hear the water rushing below and wondered where Dechlan was. The wind was cool on her hot face, like a breath of salvation. Then she heard him, as if from far away.
โNoni? Non, hey Non,โ but she saw him nowhere. Suddenly she stopped and peered over the bank at the rushing water. Somewhere within those swirling ripples she heard him again.
โNoni please, are you okay? Come back!โ The breeze was suddenly warm against her cheek, like a whisper of breath.โShe reached a weak arm down towards the water, and something grabbed it, pulling her into the river. She tried to fight back, but the hand was stronger than her and she succumbed, all the while Dechlanโs voice growing more insistent. When her eyes fluttered open, her boyfriend of six years had his hand around her wrist, keeping her from scratching him. His face was so close to hers she could feel his breath on her skin. She tried to smile but only felt a dribble of saliva slip from the corner of her mouth. Something course and foul smelling dabbed it away and her eyes darted from the beautiful face she knew so well to a strange man, speaking garbled language at her insistently. His thick dark eyebrows seemed to dance as he spoke, and his eyes showed worry. What was happening? Only when she tried to push herself up to sit did cruel memory find Noni in the way of searing pain in her right foot.
โEasy, now,โ the beautiful face coaxed. โHeโs set your foot and wrapped it, but God, Noni, itโs huge. Youโre not going to be able to walk for a few days. The doc here has a room upstairs, and heโs offered, I think, to let us stay in it until you are up again.โ
โOh, no Dech, we have to keep moving. Iโฆ I donโt want to be stuck in Rome, Italy in this time. Women werenโt exactly treated well, you know?โ She could see the doctor bustling around behind Dechlan, pulling out blankets and taking a lantern from the wall. All the while he kept speaking Italian, and she could only make out a few words. Something about โhideโ and something about โla sua graziaโ.โGrazia, graziaโฆ she wracked her muddled brain. โGrace! His, his Grace!โ she hissed into Declanโs ear. Heโs saying he needs to hide us from the Pope!โ Her eyes were wild with fear, and Dechlan knew this wouldnโt help her healing. When she tried to sit up again, he let her. As soon as she screamed and fell back, the doctor was beside them. He had a bottle of some kind of liquid, and when he poured it into the spoon, Noni looked at it with trepidation. It was thick and red with tiny bits of fiber floating on the surface.
โBere, bere, bere!โ he insisted. That word she knew well. How many times had her Nonna given her the nasty fish oil she thought would cure everything from a sick tummy to a common cold? She took a last look at the offending liquid, thinking it at least was prettier than Castor Oil.
โOkay, Iโll drink it,โ she conceded. โBut if you kill me, I swear Iโll come back and haunt you.โ Dech sniggered, and that made her smile before she opened up and accepted the spoon. The stuff was thick alright, but it tasted somewhat like berries. When the fibers tickled her throat she started coughing, but Doc Italy hurried over to dip a cupful of water from a dubious looking bucket on his work table. She drank without question, for what other choice did she have? They were at this manโs mercy, and so far heโd shown them plenty.โWhen a loud commotion rose beyond the door, he threw the blankets at Dechlan and gestured for him to pick Noni up, and fast. Then he pointed to a tall sideboard along the far wall. When Dechlan looked confused he just pushed him.
โFrettaโ! He insisted. โFretta, fretta, fretta,โ he kept saying as he pointed towards the cabinet.
โWe have to hurry, Dech. Thatโs what heโs saying. When my Nonno had a heart attack, thatโs all everyone kept sayingโฆ โ The room was beginning to swirl as the medicine heโd given her kicked in. She barely felt Dechlan pick her up and follow the odd doctor. She didnโt hear the scraping as he pulled away the sideboard to reveal a low door. She didnโt even hear the loud pounding when the soldiers wanted in. The next thing she saw and heard was Dechโs sweet face as he leaned over her, tucking the blankets around her body and whispering.
โItโs alright now, Non. Just get some rest. Iโm sure heโll bring us some food in awhile. How are you feeling?โ She saw his face fade in and out and tried to reach up and touch it, but her arm fell back onto the bed. She absolutely felt nothing as the medicine gloriously numbed the excruciating pain.
โIโฆ I,โ she said weakly, โfeel so much gratitudeโฆโ and then passed out.
to be continuedโฆ
Cheryl K Pennington copyright 2024
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5 responses to “Careless Wishes/#JusJoJan24/#CFFC/#Fiction”
This is heating up nicely!
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Thanks, Dan. If only you knew what was going through my head. I hope I can remember it all. Lol
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Wonderful ๐๐
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Thank you! Glad you liked it.
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